Oh, Mr. Time Change you are not my friend.
Why must you rob me of needed sleep?
I try and I try but I can't understand,
why is it that we follow this plan?
Oh, Mr. Time Change you are not my friend.
I feel it is time that this changing ends.
I get why you started,
But hate it the same.
Oh, Mr. Time Change you are not my friend.
My head hurts, my eyes burn,
Even my rooster doesn't understand.
Enough is enough, I have made my final command.
I enjoyed your use of personification and how you made it run through all the verses. The emphasis on the repeated lines helps state your case; "Oh, Mr. Time Change you are not my friend."
ReplyDeleteI am 100% with you on this one. WHYYYYY????? (As it's totally dark at 7 a.m. when I'm leaving for work.) I enjoyed your poem.
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